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logos good, a bit long maybe
youu shouldve actually made a movie + used that logo, and asked us to review the logo as well as the movie itself
...stupid server errors -.-
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besides the obvious it just doesnt appeal to me, and the fact that it doesnt look nice the 'moles' are only clickable when fully extended, not on their way up or down
i suggest you try for better graphics and fixing the aforementioned...
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1. it needs an option for single player vs computer - no fun playing by myself
2. 2 player didnt work for me, so i tried 3 player - that worked, but idk about 4
3. some of the statistics were wrong
4. one question asked what was the most effective way to prevent std. one of the choices was condom, the most right choice however it was still wrong the answer was abstinence.
5. better graphics. neccesity
6. some of your statistics were a bit outdated although offhand idk which
7. some of the youngest mothers - incorrect. you did not specify where. maybe in america the youngest mothers have been 12 or 13 whatever you said the answer was
but in other places throughout the world they could be as young as 9 months after puberty. so either specify location or change the question
8. get some sex ed thats *interesting* yes while im sure the vast majority of newgrounds would ace anything interesting it would still add more playability - get questions on sexual positions/ technical names for some of the more obscure fetishes/ etc
9. wherever you got your facts from double check. and triple check. find at least two - three other CURRENT sources that agree with it and verify it. sources online are fine too but make sure its an approved source that will be correct (ie not wikipedia, im not saying often times its incorrect but it can be) written library books/ school textbooks are your best bet though. especially if theyre current
overall though... this needs drastic improvement
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i espcailly like that i have high score... <.< #s 1 - 10 all karlu20 =[)
of course i suck at it so ill probably be beaten soon... point being i DID get high score ^.^
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lol other than that ive nothing constructive to say, good game, ive seen a very similar game so its not that original but it was in german so at least i can read this one :o
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but i noticed if i hit done/ submit itd start me off with 0 points and how many ever balls id died with
also before itd do that itd automatically put me at the # of points id gotten before + 0 lives, and send me to submit the score only after that would the other thing happen
so for playability id have to close it out + reopen it every time i wanted to play again...
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but quite a few times i noticed when the ball hit out of bounds on my side if i hadnt hit it id still lose a point...
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it isnt fair that it gets smaller if we lose health and the other doesnt... either make them both get smaller or dont make either get smaller (unless you add a hard mode etc)
also i hit the ball once, on the corner though, and i lost health for it...
Author's Response:
I didn't test the game. I made this game to test my actionscript ability.By the way, don't complain that its not fair! The game is relatively easy and can be beaten by a kid. Thanks! Only 1 glitch and I thought the game was gonna be screwed up.
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certaintly deserves more than a 1.99... i like the style a lot of the stuff was drawn in but it could use some more work
a lot of the stuff didnt fit just right, some of the stuff went on top that shouldve gone on bottom
it was a bit messy and all over the place
but overall it was pretty good
Author's Response:
thank you! ill try to fix once i
gets better.
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"ignoring the fact that i like the kk..."
THIS FLASH IS 10X WORSE THAN THE STUFF THEY SUBMIT
not to mention you used the term gay, when if you were trying to be MATURE you wouldve used a term that is not derrogatory
put more effort into your flash
and if you hate the kk so much than be mature about it or dont even bother
they, like you most likely (although i had to write this) enjoy to evoke negative reactions from ppl
and ignoring the protests nearly everyones going to say thats what true artists do, evoke emotions, negative or positive or neutral
a writer can evoke love or hate for any character, along with a ride variety of other emotions
as an artist/ cartoonist/ etc can evoke emotions through their drawings
the kk uses a different medium but they still evoke an emotion from you, be it fear (screamers) hatred or awe it doesnt matter
just leave em alone already theyre not gonna go away :p
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"you took your damn time about it -.-"
yay its great <3 *stalks*
lol anyways:
my only problem with it (which is entirely MY COMPUTERS FAULT) is part way through my screen saver came on somewhere right at the end of episode 1... im not re-watching it but because of that since this 1 is longer i wanna rewind/ fast foward button pweeeeease?
Author's Response:
I'm not putting a fast forward/rewind button in just because you missed a bit! Just rewatch it, you know you want to :p
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